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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2013 4:13 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Completion

This was an amazing way to show off the strength of Kagome and InuYasha's relationship! Even through rough patches they are able to stand by each other. Kagome did get angry when she thought InuYasha was comparing her to kikyo but both she and InuYasha knew that she would find it in herself to forgive him. But even with knowing that InuYasha knew how imperative it was for him to apologize and do so soon. They had been through so much the night before, and InuYasha was positive that they would forever be at a standstill if he left it as it was. Such a strong story with an equally strong resolution. This was amazing to read, thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2009 4:21 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Completion

That was really cool. These are the good kinds of lemons. I get annoyed dby the gratuitous sex, but this was the loving, sweet sort that its meant to be. in conveyed real feeling between the two. The only thing about it I imagine might be different in actuality is i think Kagome would have to be the agressor because Inuyasha get sooooooo Awkward about that stuff. but i really like this one. I guess If i want that i will just have to learn hopw to write these. Lol. Its a cute story. I enjoyed readin it, and it made me think even more fondly of kirara.

Author's Response: Kagome is pretty awkward about that sort of thing too.  Maybe she has a slight advantage because she lives in the modern era, but they are both virgins in every sense of the word.  Thanks for the review, though.  This was my first story and first lemon, so I was pretty nervous when I first posted it. 





Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2009 3:28 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Moment of Clarity

Oh, wow, that is just amazing. I loved that soooooo much! Just wow! Drama drama drama right? Poor Inuyasha. I actually felt all achy when he got stabbed, which happens to me when a story is really absorbing. I really enjoyed this! I'm just abou as releived as Kagome!





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2008 4:52 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Completion

"Now he glared at the bra as if it were a vile, evil thing...."   LOL!!!  So cute - gotta love InuYasha's bra struggles!  This was very sweet - loved it!  :)

Author's Response:

Bras are vile, evil things.  Though I likes the push-up ones...  (Ah!  Hentai!  Bad!) 





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 5:10 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Completion

Know something? I'm really sorry that this story had to end. There are just so many possibilities for a couple of extra chapters. This was very well done.





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 3:54 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Moment of Clarity

Wow! You have a very unique style of writing. This chapter is fantastic! Please continue to write stories such as this one, for you are truly talented.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2008 1:26 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Completion

This was a very good story.  I liked it alot and hope to see more like it or a part 2 from you.  I also love how Kirara helps them so much.



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