Date: November 06, 2013 7:52 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet. You had impeccable details in this and it was an enjoyable read! I love the way you rewrote the ending in a way, the additional details were just enough to make my heart soar. All of this wrapped around Kagome's ideal kiss was a flawless way of delivery, because all along her ideal kiss was waiting for her, just as InuYasha was. Very well done.