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Reviewer: King Baka Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2009 2:15 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8 Plans and Interruptions

Oh, these two...always getting interrupted.  Not that I can say anything about that without being a complete hypocrit.  This story intrigues me, and I want to read more.  I hope you have plans to finish it.  At least Haru has the common sense to not cause trouble, but Jiro may have picked a fight with the wrong Inu-youkai.  I wonder what Kaede's solution to the prejudice problem is.  Maybe kicking all the bigots out of the village?  If only...

Author's Response: Ah, but this is the first time they've been interrupted in YT...I have a lot of plans to keep this going.  YT's sort of my chapter fic version of what I'm doing with all the littlle pieces...





Reviewer: mayu28 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2009 8:28 pm
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7 Morning Revelations

Thanks for updating!





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2009 8:07 pm
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7 Morning Revelations

Poor Rin, but knowing what Sukeo knows (and what he doesn't know), he's just trying to protect his brother, I'm assuming. 

It's been a while since I've read this...I'm going to have to go back and refresh my memory a bit to figure out how I feel about Haru.  

I simply love, love, LOVE how you write InuYasha and Kagome together.  You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors, and I think my absolute favorite as far as the pairing goes.  Everything is just so real and I can never get enough!  Now I'm going back to read a bit and will probably read this chapter again afterward, but before I forget...great update!!  :o)  I can't wait for the next!





Reviewer: King Baka Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2009 5:11 pm
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7 Morning Revelations

Poor Rin.  It must suck not having any friends her own age.  I have a feeling things will start heading downwards pretty quickly now that the wedding is imminent and Haru and Jiro are on their way.  One wonders what kind of trouble their witch of a sister will cause.  You officially have me hooked on this story.  I will wait eagerly for your next update. 





Reviewer: King Baka Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2009 3:27 am
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6 Spinning Thoughts After Dark

Excellent so far.  Your Inuyasha is done especially well.  I really hope you continue with this story. 



Author's Response: Appreciate the comments! 





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 5:17 am
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6 Spinning Thoughts After Dark

Very nice.  I like how you are setting up some problems fown the road for them but at the same time how much they want to and there friends want them to be togther.  One thing I did notice you saying that she does not know how to cook over a open fire.  I though she rosterd boars and fish in the anima and manga.  While I know she would need to learn more it would not be all new to her.  One thing I wounder is can she mane ramon for him now that she is back.  I know it would not be instan ramon but I bet one of the things she may have learned in her time to feel close would be how to make raman from scrach and while it may not be quite right I bet should could make at lest something like it for him.

Author's Response:

There's a real difference between campfire cooking and cooking real everyday cooking, like making rice and soup and all the other everyday food on an open fire.  It does take some learning.  Noodles are harder.  They had noodles in Japan at that time, but they weren't exactly Ramen.  And they take a lot of work, and were usually only made on special occasions and holidays because of the work involved in making the noodles themselves, although with InuYasha's fondness for Ramen, I suspect Kagome, once she got the knack down, would probably make them more often than most people. 

 So I see Kagome used to being able to make a wide variety of dishes on a modern stove, but learning how to do that in a fire pit is different.  She'll get the hang of it, but it's different.  





Reviewer: mayu28 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 8:09 pm
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6 Spinning Thoughts After Dark

Keep up the super amazing work! I always enjoy your work, and almost everyday I ask myself, "I wonder if Knittingknots wrote anything today..." Thank you for the amazing stories. When do you think you'll update After the End, and Cruelity in Men's Hearts?

Author's Response:

I've started working on ATE today, believe it or not.  But the other story, I am contemplating doing some serious editing on before I update it...so it may be awhile.

 I do appreciate the good word!  I love writing the stories for themselves, but I also love hearing that people enjoy them, too!

 





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 2:40 am
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6 Spinning Thoughts After Dark

You have painted a beautiful picture in InuYasha and Kagome.  I can feel the love between them; not many authors can do that, but you have.  Nicely done. 

I'm definitely getting more nervous about Haname and Tsuneo.  Something's going to go down, and I don't think I'm going to like it....

This was a great chapter!  I was so excited when I saw this story was updated!  *squeals*  I'm looking forward to the next one!  :)



Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for the kind words on my characterization. That really makes me feel good...I was a little nervous about this chapter...





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2008 12:22 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5 Perceptions

I like how simple the changes are going. It is also nice to see some of the insight to the people trying to deal with the changes. Please keep this going.





Reviewer: akdreamer Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2008 5:46 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3 Morning Tales

That was such an AWESOME chapter, this story is really taken off...Can't wait to see what happens nexted....LOL poor Miroku......

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you like it!





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 10:46 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Rediscovery

I'll be looking forward to it!





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2008 3:36 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2 Union

Beautifully written. I loved the sweet lemonade that you gave us and can't wait for your next chapter, K.K.

Like I said, I just love the way you write about these two!



Author's Response: I am glad you liked it!  There will be more...I'm playing with both it and ATE right now...Don't know which will get done first, but I expect both of them to have chapters soon.





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2008 11:09 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Rediscovery

***SIGH***

 

I just love the way you write about our loveable hanyou and his Miko. So beautiful!





Reviewer: AngelOfLight Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2008 12:14 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2 Union

WOW, nice, hot, awsome, that's all i can say for this chapter.Keep writing and updating as fast as you can. ^_^





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2008 3:43 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2 Union

Very fluffy, and I think just perfect.  I hope they get a little while to enjoy they're reunion be for the pairie cakes hit the fan.

Author's Response: There will be some time...but you know, since this is one of my stories, there will be bad guys over the horizon...



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