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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2013 12:05 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I love the way you described this situation, it is the exact way I have imagined it. The rest of the gang imagines InuYasha to have naughty intentions towards kikyo I always thought Kagome knew the truth. You show that perfectly! Great job





Reviewer: Dark_kirara Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2008 11:18 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was a very sweet oneshot, and my only critique is that you might have too many dots(......) seperating some sentences and thoughts. I like using dots....they are fun...and they are good for showing hesitation..and such. Thats it though nothing big. :) :)

Author's Response: I know! I got really excited but I hope with a little practice, my dottyness will be under control!  LOL  :-)





Reviewer: Rinoa Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 5:32 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Great! I like it! Very tender...I thought you were going somewhere else with this to begin with and then you surprised me with the flowers...sweet! You have to do more ^_^





Reviewer: chanda Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 7:17 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Lol, you need critiques. Well, this was sweet and romantic, and a great one shot! However, I did see a couple of spelling errors, or maybe I should say typos. LOL. As far as critiques, you're doing just fine.

I didn't know you wrote, and I just found out when I'd seen this story posted, I had to go back to my reviews and see if this was the same person and yep, so I read both your stories and am looking forward to more of your work.

Until next time,

Chanda



Author's Response: Again thanks!  That's what I get for typing and giggling on the phone at the same time!! :-)  I'll be more focused on the story and less on my friend's antics LOL



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