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Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2010 9:13 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5

I don't know how I feel about this story, it was very well written with a wonderful emotionial component. It was depressing, had it's happy moments, but as for actually liking the story; I don't know. This isn't meant to keep you from writing as I think that you have great talent and can't wait to see what else you come up with.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2010 5:17 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

It seems to me like he's trapped by some sort of spell. That would explain his memory gaps, why Gramps oufudda worked, as well as why his strength seems to keep disapearing.





Reviewer: Ariel Himura Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2008 5:38 am
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5

that was done very interestingly...i wont lie...i was confused on some parts but from the beginning i thought that he was in a coma or just unconscience...just from the way that you desided to write this...but the one part that confuses me is the part where he does jump into the well...if you could explain that scene with naraku to me that would be great...

any ways...good show...i could picture everything out...it was amazing...



Author's Response: When he jumped into the well he woke up. When he passed out again he was back at the shrine. The scene with Naraku was reality.





Reviewer: SaiyanBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 7:05 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5

Wow. This story has stunned me beyond all belief. The threads of reality and dream are woven so masterfully together that we can feel the confusion and pain that Inuyasha is going through. The ending is such a twist and is heartbreaking, but at the same time is perfect and true to Inuyasha and Kagome's characters. I had a wonderful and enlightening time reading this and I'm so glad that you chose to share it with us.

Absolutely wonderful.





Reviewer: Keiko-Chan Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 1:10 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Erosion

Wow JM, you outdid yourself.  lol. I thought it was amazing, well thought out, and it was a nice plot.  I admire that it didn't get confusing, because it had to potential to just lose you if it wasn't done right. But, you did it damn right and it worked out beautifully!

 

Well done JM, well done. :)

~KC





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2008 9:30 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Erosion

READ THIS STORY!!!!

I read this on mm.org, but I saw this here I thought I'd add a review here, cause everyone and there mama's got to read this story.





Reviewer: InuGrrrl Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2008 8:54 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Erosion

First!! I really enjoyed this when I read it. Aside from being well thought out and fun/fluffy/dramatic in all of the right places, you don't come off like a pretentious snot like a lot of canon does. You made me, someone that avoids canon like an illness, want to read more.

I think it's safe to say you've got a winner here.

Author's Response:

You better have enjoyed it. Your input really got me to clean up a couple of the confusing bits.



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