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Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 6:57 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

okay interested!
Update soon!
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Reviewer: inuyashaloverr Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 6:11 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Yea, I like this.





Reviewer: fallenangel7583 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2007 11:21 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

hmm. i sense a 'naraku's still alive' coming here. i may be off on that thought though. it could make for a great plot however. you have a well deveolped beginning. i feel bad for Kagome, but i'm sure that InuYasha is doing this for some reason (beyond his normal annoying controlling self). well done with the characters, i love how you summerized the events that have lead up to your story.

my only advice is to watch your tenses. a couple times i noticed a switch from past tense to present tense within a paragraph. It doens't take away from the plot though, so that's good!

your story is awesome, i can't wait to read more!





Reviewer: InuGoddess715 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2007 8:30 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Good start. I look forward to reading more of this soon.



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