Date: March 27, 2008 8:26 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1
interesting, it's a wonder that he's willing to let them go first. one would think that he would at least go the a stream and rinse the majority off first.
watch malapropisms. a 'peak' is the top of something. to 'peek' is to covertly look at something.
Author's Response: Actually, thats in the second chapter. I ended the first the way I did to set up the second. Yea, I saw that but was too tired to fix it. It's fixed now along with the spelling of Hiraikotsu. Thank you for reading and reviewing.