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Reviewer: InuGome Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2008 11:56 am
Chapter number: 11
Title: Apprehension

keep a-going!

Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 10:13 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Love Can Kill

well isnt this story interesting.. i thik it is!

Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 9:29 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: Impressions

Whoa.. so miroku gay as is sango. sango is lusting ova kagome kagome is bi.. which is nothing bad to be.and.. inu killed kagz mom......hmm.. OH and sesshomaru is a cry baby.
This story is so interesting ..i luv it.. but every 1 is so OOC.
But its gettin HOT!

Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 8:37 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Secret Window: Prologue

Damn that was a very deep chapter.
I think the pple that were raped and abused and dont just give up r one of the strongest kindof pple out there.
great chap.. in a sad/ good way

Reviewer: fallenangel7583 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2007 10:30 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: A New Way

this is a rough story to swallow, i'll say that. you have hit a number of emotions with the force of a semi at eighty MPH. poor kagome; to have so much crap happen to her. no wonder why she falls into abusive relatinships 24/7. poor kid. i loved that you made Miroku gay, talk about a wonderful fresh breath on concepts! LOL. i alwyas thought he would make a wonderful gay guy!!! LOL!!!

my suggestion to the writing is that your packing so much material into your chapters that it becomes nearly overbearing at certain points (especially those angst filled scenes). slow down, take your time. pick two or three major plot points to elaborate through the chapter, to convey to your readers. next chapter, touch back on what you covered but introduce more.
you have a good story here with a strong foundation. poor kagome (insert sob here). good writing and keep it up!!

Reviewer: InuGrrrl Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 9:43 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Secret Window: Prologue

Now THIS is what I wanted to see!!! Sexy_C, welcome to ED! I'm so glad to see you in da house, since you know you're one of my all-time favorite writers! Love this story, and can't wait for all the good ass updates!! ^_^

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