Date: September 17, 2009 11:38 pm
Chapter number: 8
Title: Change the World
Very sensual. A very good first-time lemon.
XD Not saying it was your first time WRITING a lemon, more like, Kagome's first time lemon.
Sorry if that came out wrong. Great job! (I'll stick the basics from now on)
Date: September 15, 2009 7:25 am
Chapter number: 1
I reviewed on MM, I'll post it here too. xD
That lemon was incredibly beautiful, and exceptionally written! Sizzling yet with just the right touch of romance (wow, my grammar is dead right now...) which is everything that a lemon should be. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: September 06, 2009 8:07 am
Chapter number: 7
Title: Hard Truths
Welcome back. I think you got Shippo perfect in this chapter with how he was done. I know I hope she can not convince him to go back. While deomon may still be in her time and some may attack it also means that some can help.