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Reviewer: Inuyashalover94 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2008 7:37 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Its Him..

hey plz keep on writing and try to make the chapters longer. i luv it!!!





Reviewer: TinanaBanana Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2008 5:12 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fun under the sun

That was a very very good story!!

 well done. u no who this is haha:P





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2008 11:22 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fun under the sun

This is good Very nice, indeed. But, if you don't mind me saying this...proof-read your chappies before you post. That way, you'll be able to see any mistakes that you made unknowingly, especially around the punctuation, like comma's and such.

All in all, it's really quite good and I'm looking forward to your next chappie. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: Thanks vikikiouki, im glad that you enjoyed my story, and i will take what you have said into account. thankyou again for your imput.



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