Date: August 24, 2013 1:22 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Part 2
Very cute. I loved every second of this: from InuYasha thinking a chicken youkai was the cause of this disease to InuYasha and Kagome getting closer due to the whole ordeal. You obviously out a lot of thought into this and it definitely shows. The touch about InuYasha's human night hitting forcing him to endure the dreadfulness if chicken pox was clever, and I really think it helped to further the relationship They had. Nicely done!
Date: April 06, 2007 12:13 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Part 2
Part two!! I love that this one shot is in two parts! So neat!! I enjoyed the way Inuyasha went to Kagome as soon as he heard her fall. So sweet how Inuyasha gathered Kagome into his arms and went straight for the bathroom to help cool her down. Souta's adding more spots was very cute! and very true with a lot of kids.. (my brother..) I do have a question here. Was the water in the tub fresh or from Souta's soaking? I really liked how Inuyasah despite his misgivings and knowing Kagome's attitude about seeing her naked quickly started to get Kagome perpared for the bath. And a huge WOW and Thank You for having Kagome react in a reasonable manner! The line 'Do you trust me' was very touching and powerful! Swoons happily! I do like the complimentary blushes they both had upon getting her naked though.. Kagome was wondering if it was a blush or her fever.. And the way she thought she saw in Inuyasha's eyes! Literary Goddess!! This is really an astounding One Shot!! Loving it!! Bravo!! Kagome has the pox now!! Oh dear!! I hope it isn't going to bad for her! I liked how Kagome asked for Inuyasha to stay with her while she was feeling faint. Excellent! Kudos! Then having him check her back for the signs of chickenpox. I guess that when Kagome asked Inuyasha to check on Souta and get the Tylenol that she was feeling better enough to not be supervised? Shrugs.. is a puzzle.. I do love teh way Kagome is now needing Inuyasha's help. All those times she takes care of him and he only got a few chances to take care of her.. Swoons very happily!! And to have Inuyasha returning with the bottle of Tylenol and take a moment to reflect upon the egnima that is Kagome! Races around the room very happily!! Bravissimo!! When Inuyasha towelled her off I would gather he had her sitting on the toilet lid or something? I trilled at the way Souta was very helpful with his sister!That scene was big squish moment of familial bonding!! YAY!! For Squish!! You are the Best!! Positively the Best!!Then to end the squish with the humourous touch of applying cream to her body!! giggles at the discomfort Inuyasha is putting his mind into! Oh dear! Inuyasha is going to learn about Kagome's fears! Her nightmare gave her away! I hope they will talk! *sits on edge of seat* He certainly takes his role of caretaker very seriously! Too cute!! A thought popped up... Is Inuyasha wearing his haori? and if so is the sleeves tacked back? Inuyasha had to complain about teh cream! Cute! Yep!! There it happened!! The truth is out! And Kagome doesn't know she gave her deep secret away while she's talking in her sleep. Now what is going to happen next?? I loved the tender way he brushed her hair from her face and told her he loved her too! Squish! at its Best!! Whoot!! That Rocks!! You write the best Squish ever!! Thanks so very much Literary Goddess!! Eep! Inuyash is turning human while the chickenpox is still infectous!! Oh my!! Wriggles with anxiety!! what will happen! I really liked how you had Souta go over to a friends house! Kudos!! That rocks! I can just picture the rash spreading like a ink stain or like water over a surface! Oh my! and Inu hasn't had any futuristic shots or medication! I'm wondering becuase he is human for the nigh it'll be very serious! Hee!! Kagome had to remind Inuyasha about the location of some spots! Oh man! I have sooo much sympathy for Inuyasha being covered in the spots! and they would all itch like mad!! Poor Inuyasha I don't think he's ever expericenced anything as itchy as the chickenpox! I did laugh when Inuyasha thought Kagome was getting ill again because she flushed red at the sight of her Hanyou naked! Too funny adn so very cute! Exquiste! You write it all so very exquistely!! and soo beautifully!! I was correct! The chickenpox is reacting differently because of his youkai blood! Oh Literary Goddess the Angst and Tenseness(?) that you have created here is Astounding!! I did laugh at the description of Inuyasha using the rosary to scratch his itches! HA! She has blurted it out and while awake! That was brillant!! How you had Kagome say she loves him while her mind was occupied with getting Inuyasha dried off and soothed over with cream! I can only imagine the discomfort males must go through with the chickenpox!! Inuyasha passed out from the fever! Very clever thinking on Kagome's part to keep Inuyasah where he is and use her bed sheet to cool him off by socking it in the water! All these realistic touches are positively astounding!! and Only serves to create a full bodied and more of a keep teh attention story! Each and every little tidbit you weave so expertly into your storyies really create the best reading ever!! And for keeping them in perfect character I say Whoot!! Bravo!! having Inuyasha get super testy and biting when he is upset or uncomfortable and having Kagome react poorly to the situation! Kudos!!! Had time gone by for Inuyasha to take more Tylenol? I do love the way you had Kagome not take advantage or get aroused from helping care for Inuyasha while he is very ill. An Awesome touch! Good thinking on Kagome's part again! She put socks over inuyasha's hands! I do so very much cherish the way you have the two of them be intelligent! (a pet peeve of mine when they are protray as morons or idiots).. The removal of the rosary and the way she stated it was Prefect!! Postively Perfect! That Rocks!! Literary Goddess!! That is great!! I loved the way he discovered the socks on his hands!! Cute!!Loved how Kagome's earlier question was answered! Oh my.. Kagome pulling a Miroku!! That is Great!! Loved it when Inuyasha asked if he could get dressed now! I can imagine that Kagome may have used up at least nearly all of the lotion on Inuyasha to keep his itches soothed. I can see the sheel-shocked look on his face when Kagome joined him in the shower to help him out! And they just held each other without anyone making it into something awful or to be ashamed of!! Very touching!! I very much love every single squish moment in this story! The way she told Inuyasha why the rosary was gone and then to help him with the difficult situation of saying he loves her by saying she knew - another great Squish moment! Swoons very happily!! That is postively Astounding and Glorious! Thank you Literary Goddess!! For sharing this story with us, for writing it! For letting me review it! The ending was so touching! Thanks indeed to Chicken Youkai!!
Date: April 05, 2007 11:22 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Attack of the Chicken Youkai (Part 1)
Hmm... Oh-my where should I start!! Whheeee!! Literary Goddess!! I am so very much loving this!! How you beautifully write them all in character!! How Miroku and Shippou both jump all over Inuyasha about Kagome's lack of presence, how Inuyasha gets so irritable without Kagome around. I enjoyed how his mood quickly changes when Kagome is out of sorts.Literary Goddess You so Rock!! I love this!! And I fangirl squee-ed at the tenderness Inuyasha showed towards the exhausted Kagome. Too cute how Inuyasha misunderstood the term Chickenpox to meaning an actual chicken youkai. And I loved the way two people can start off with one sort of understanding while explaining something to confusion between the two after words.. I have been there many a time! The touches of realism is so Amazing!! and Serves to enhance the story! Inuyasha is still convienced that A demon is the source of the illness! I love the way you have Souta and Inuaysha interact! The sock over the hands bit was very neat touch!Poor Inuaysha he would naturally feel bad about being angry with Kagome, but how could he know. I feel the same way about those type of pitchers as Inuyasha, I have troubles trying to open them as well.. groans remembering last time she embarrassed herself with the pitcher.. and the way Souta was concerned for his sister. Kagome will burn herself out with her needs to care for others. Sighs very happily!! *and Glows!!* Inuyasha is rubbing her back!! So sweet! Kudos on these sweet touches!! And the way you switch from Inuyasha to Kagome is so smooth and fluid!! Curious?? Where is the computer located in the house? I so very much loved this addition as well! The way Kagome researched it before she even thought about going back and the way she protects Kaede's village as well! Very mature and level-headed!! KUDOS!! I had to chuckle that Kagome thought it was her mother rubbing her back only to open her eyes to see Inuyasha and then at the cute innocent way he still wants to know how chickens can cause problems.. Too cute!! Kagome was wonderful in her reaction to Inuyasha's confession he saw Souta. (others would have her sit him and yell at him..) Again a Grand and Brillant way of expressing her intelligence and quick thinking! Bravissimo!! Bravo!! WHOOT!!(at least Kagome is getting a postive thing from this latest developement.. that Inuyasha and she can spend time together alone without interfernce from teh others! Loved how Inuyasha goes into take care of the wench that is His Kagome mode. I really do love the way you blend the serious matter with the hint of humour to create a glorious feast for the reader! Beams happily!! I see, after reviewing the chapter for LaLD-LtD that massages are showing up into your stories!! I like that!! Very much! I giggled at Kagome's cute attempt to entice her Hanyou. Very cute! Adored and Trilled at the way Inuaysha reacted so very much in character when up against a situation like this!! Brillant!! Postively Brillant!! Snoring!! That's Great!! The Great and Mighty Inuyasha Snoring!! The way they discussed how Inuyasha was going to let the others know was Awesome!! Postively Awesome! I did want to thump Shippou for being a right pain in the butt, but that is his character when it comes to interacting with Inuyasha! I loved the way he would only explain it once everyone was present and would understand. I liked that Inuyasha fell into caring for Kagome and her brother without any fussing or complaining... I am wigging about the places that there are spots.. Very nicely done the way Kagome asked Inuyasha to rub her aching back.. sighs.. now if we all had our own Hanyou to this for us! I loved that Inuyasha let Kagome rub his back as well later on!! So sweet!! and them falling asleep together in the traveling pose was precious!! I can't wait to review the next part!! You so very much Totally Rock Literary Goddess!!