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Reviewer: mraestalyn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 6:41 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: An Unwelcomed Guest (Unedited)

Onigumo's reincarnation... that's certainly a twist. Although the plot has darkened, this past scene hasn't deterred me from reading it. You were able to describe the situation from Kagome's P.O.V. which made it softer (if that sounds at all appropriate). I definitely applaud you for writing the scene-- I would think it be a hard one to describe (because of the emotions). I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  Actually, and I know this is going to sound terrible, this scene was the easiest for me to write.  What girl doesn't have nightmares (or at least is terribly afraid) of some guy catching them alone and raping them?  As a writer, it's not hard to dip into those fears in myself and put them on paper.  Emotionally, however, these kinds of scenes are increadibly difficult.  Afterwards I felt so disgusting and I was sad for the rest of the day.  Still, it is somewhat theraputic to create this kind of a scenario for one of your (or in this case someone else's) characters.  You are in complete control and you feel if the things that you're most afraid of are now happening to someone else, the odds that the same thing happens to you is far less likely than it was before.  I know that this is increadibly unreasonable, but for some unknown reason, it's true.





Reviewer: mraestalyn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 5:38 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: An Intimate Conversation

*sniffles* Noooo-- I want more! I loved Inuyasha's heart-felt confession. He's never been good with words, but Kagome's own confession seemed to help him admit what he was feeling. Still hasn't proclaimed his love for her yet! I can't wait to find out the rest!

Author's Response: Up until now, it's been nothing but fluff.  In the next chapter tragedy strikes and we're all in for a wild and angsty ride. 





Reviewer: mraestalyn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 5:30 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Short Fuse

Ah, Kagome's side of the story. This certainly solidifies the character's actions and personalities giving the story more strength. You were very good at painting her frustrations. I wanted to smack Inu myself.

Author's Response: I enjoyed spending quality time with each character over this one scene.  It doesn't happen again and I'm hoping that leaving it this way is enough.





Reviewer: mraestalyn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 5:22 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Big Mouth

Excellent beginning! Your talent for expressing Inuyasha's inner turmoil is positively brilliant. You seriously should be getting more reviews than this, but I know how it is. :) I have 7 chapters and 2 reviews on this site. Don't worry! I still love the story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! 





Reviewer: inuyashaloverr Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 4:41 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: An Intimate Conversation

Well, am on the third page here, and all seems OK thus far. Only thing I might suggest is maybe formatting. Spreading the paragraphs a little further apart. Makes it easier to read is all. Specially for us Old Folk, hehe. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, I hadn't thought about that.  I'll definately try to change that with my next chapters.





Reviewer: InuGome Signedstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 12:04 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Short Fuse

Grrr KEEP GOING!

Author's Response: I am!  I hope your frustration means you liked it. 





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 1:24 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Big Mouth

Tried and true...it's been a long times sense I've read that kind of reaction in a story.  I hope things turn out eventually sense the preview makes it sound like its going to get a lot worse before it gets better.  Will we ever find out what she was keeping from him?

Author's Response:

Actually, yes. :)  We find out what she was keeping from him in this next chapter. 

You're right, it is going to get worse, but I hope you like it enough to keep reading.  Please let me know if there's any holes in my story or anything that needs to be improved upon.



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