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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2013 12:56 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Of Demons and Schoolgirls

I love the title of this piece, I just wanted to start with that because it snagged my attention! The next thing would be I loved the narrative. Getting inside of Kagome's head the way you did was perfect, and her petulant thoughts on being saved really brought the humor out very well. Overall this was a great piece and the humor mingled well with the romance. One of my favorite bits was at the end where InuYasha kept bumping his hand against Kagome's. Clearly he wanted to hold her hand, he just wasn't going to make the move to do so or ask for it! Nice job! Thank you for sharing :)





Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2009 8:41 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Of Demons and Schoolgirls

Firstly, your summary is great! I had to read this after a summary like that.

 So glad I did! It's the cutest thing ever! So in character that it could be a snippet from a lost episode! Adorable and perfect! I totally love this. You are really great, you need to put up more stuff. Just the right amoutn of fluff, with the perfect preceeding event and follow up. So good. I'm blown away by this. I really enjoyed it. Just...wow, I don't know what else to say. That, and I'm adding you to my favorites list!





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07, 2009 3:38 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Of Demons and Schoolgirls

This was perfect!!  I loved it; you nailed InuYasha like so few can do, and Kagome, as well.  Great job!!  ^_^





Reviewer: King Baka Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2008 4:43 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Of Demons and Schoolgirls

Excellent one-shot!  Your characterizations of Kagome and Inuyasha are spot-on, complete with just the right amount of fluff.  Loved the dialogue and the ending especially. 





Reviewer: BowandArrow08 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2008 4:03 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Of Demons and Schoolgirls

That was really adorable. I loved how it flowed, and i think you portrayed the characters very well. Kagome's personality was almost on the mark. Great job!





Reviewer: JediK1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2008 2:54 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Of Demons and Schoolgirls

This was very cute, and a pleasure to read!  I love those cute fluffy moments!



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