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Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2008 12:07 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: I Am Lost, So I Am Cruel

This is very sad and depression at the moment.  It is good but sad.  It does feel like you are making Kagome's death and Rins comma are linked and to help one you have to help both.  While I do not see Inu doing this it is only becouse I feel he would shutdown all togther without her.  Please keep the story going and please give us a happy ending at the end.

 

As to the Beta I would help but my spelling and grammer sucks.



Author's Response: I guess, a the time I started writing this, I was going through some dark times myself. In the beginning this was simply a one shot, and it was just going to be like that. But many friends ask me to continue with this, and it had to think hard as to what direction I wanted to take. And who was going to be the 'big bad', etc. I guess after I started writing some ideas down, this one just took shape and a life of it's own.  Haha... who would have thought...



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