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Reviewer: cesuraee Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2013 8:19 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Inuyasha the Victor!

Oh jealous InuYasha certainly does provide some entertainment. I liked him shutting the door in Hojo's face!





Reviewer: axel720 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2008 1:37 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Inuyasha the Victor!

Is this your first fic? I think it was a nice try =) You really need to work on your formatting though (i know ED can be annoying when you're uploading a chap, but good format adds to the overall quality of the story). I think the plot was a good idea, but you should try setting the scene more, have some more explanations, descriptions, dialogue. I can tell an author is great when they can pull me into their story and their characters. This doesn't necessarily mean the fic has to be one great big long descriptive thing, but you need to establish your personal writing style and make a simple idea something more interesting and engaging for the reader. The title really caught my eye, and I loved how Inu just went right to the point. With lots of practice you'll write some really good stuff, and i'll look forward to seeing how you progress as an author =)



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