Reviews For Reluctant Charade
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Reviewer: la623 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2008 5:28 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

I just read this and i love it! can't wait to read more!





Reviewer: Nekoreibaka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2008 4:23 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

Ello. This is  RREALLY good fic. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^





Reviewer: clavira Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2008 10:36 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Hehe, sounds great!!! Kikyo's a bitch, but I guess it's only fair that Inu Yasha will leave her in the end...

the only thing I find slightly confusing is that you use '...' when someone talks instead of "..."   it's hard to know whether someone is talking or only thinking.

 anyway, hope you update soon!!!!





Reviewer: vampire liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2008 12:20 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

It doesnt really make sense. There is no reason why inuyasha is so angry and mean, you cant tell what he is looking for half the time, and kikyo and his relationship is too vague. its all very confusing. Also, the spacing is a huge problem, its nearly impossible to read. everyline of dialogue has to be a new paragraph, and every paragraph should be a double space from the last. its too cluttered and jumbled. the idea could be good, but the formatting and arrangment need work.





Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2008 3:34 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

i would love to know what happens next



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