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Reviewer: ChildOfTheMoon Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2008 12:01 pm
Chapter number: 7
Title: Homecoming

I absolutely love this!

I want to know what happrns with inu's plan and if miroku really changes


please write more

Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 10:06 am
Chapter number: 5
Title: Steps

I do like the way that you have Inuyasha getting frustrated with the group sessions. It feels so real... Kudos to the research! I do love how Inuyasha found he inspiration he need to stay the course! Kagome as his wife! So sweet!

The doctor is aweome too!

Glad Kagome gave Sango the run-down of Miroku's unpleasant qualities... she won't be unaware of when they met up. Kagome looking out for her friend. Though I am also unhappy that she has also set Sango up with so much pain. Miroku is a sex hunting commitment-phobic guy. He isn't going to change that way of life overnight or within a couple of months either.

Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signedstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 9:59 am
Chapter number: 4
Title: The Facility

yea... I know about those little problems with snoozing in a moving car...

I am sad that Miroku now wants to stay at the Re-hab because mostly of the women. I do like that he is still sticking by Inuyasha (though with the vocal complaints).. I'll be laughing if he got the same wake up call... that the girl he likes will have nothing to do with him because of his problem.

I am wondering if Inuyasha will have to fight off the attentions of other women while at the center...

I think right now.. my favourite part is when Inuyasha called Kagome to let her know where he was and that he was getting help to get her back. I was so proud of him!

Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2008 10:21 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: Help

The realistic way Inuyasha researched/contacted those Rehab centers was a very nice touch. I do like the way Miroku is sticking by his side even if his exclaimations of "I don't have a problem.." is so true of an addictic. I was unhappy with the way Miroku wanted to pin all the blame on Inuyasha's shoulders and mind. With his personality he would have harrassed Inuyasha non-stop until in order to get any peace Inuyasha would have had to agree.

I like that you are showing both sides of the drug problem.

Author's Response: thank you for your review! I didn't like how Miroku's personality came out either, but thought he is an addict. The alcohol has damaged him to the point that he is not the same as he once was, and the fact that did place the blame on Inuyasha just proves how deep the alcohol goes.

Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 11:16 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Decision

I like this second chapter! You really have the emotions going. I really like that Inuyasha is using the buddy system and making his friend seek help as well.

Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 8:28 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Break-Up

hmm. Interesting story you have started. Wonder where it's going.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comment, it is very much appreciated. As for where it is going you just have to read to find out lol. Thank you again.

Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2008 5:49 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Decision

Well it seems you got a new reader. YAY! haha.

I like this story. It has some different qualities then some of the other alcoholic Inu's. Especially since Kagome left and that Inuyasha still smells of cheap perfume meaning you got to be pretty close to hve it stuck on you.

So Im looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response: Thank you :). The next chapter should be up in a few. I am actually working on it right now :D

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