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Reviewer: mayu28 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2008 3:07 am
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14

I d olove this story and all the stories you do. Please update soon.

 





Reviewer: kmoaton Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2008 10:40 pm
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14

Glad to see you have updated.  Everything was really good and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it...not every month ATE demands that I update like this, but the story wants this section told!  lOL...





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2008 9:58 pm
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13 Bindings

I like this alot so far.  Please continue it.  I look foward to the next part.

Author's Response: I promise, it will be continued....it's a long way from over, too...





Reviewer: kmoaton Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2008 7:52 pm
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13 Bindings

I can't wait to find out what happens next!!  Great chapter!





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 6:30 am
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12 Webs

man...I feel bad for Inuyasha and Kagome I get the feeling, that its not going to be easy for them.  Is it hard to right there world like that.  I would find it hard not to give them and easy life, that they deserve.





Reviewer: Roxotaku Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 12:04 am
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12 Webs

I loved it! The pacing was heart racing and exciting! The lime was beautiful, just what I would have imagined, with the right amount of tenderness and desire. Of course you know how I feel about the creepy beginning. ::shiver:: Great horror! I love how you capture the essence of the yama uba and make your skin crawl....The end was a real cliff hanger - and that is good! Gets you excited for the next chapter and I am!  I need to know what happened to Kagome - my heroine, I love her!





Reviewer: xochitl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 6:50 pm
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11

wow i just hope ure not one of thos writersthat update every year..... keep up thegraet work

Author's Response: I promise, it'll be more than once a year...but it does go slow.  Takes time to write it well!





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 10:46 pm
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11

I waited a bit so that I had a few chapters to read. I went through from chappie 1 up to this last chapter all in one go.

Fantastic! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!





Reviewer: Inuyashalover94 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2008 7:35 pm
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11

thats an awesome chapter can't wait for upcoming ones!!!





Reviewer: kmoaton Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2008 11:08 am
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11

I am so mad!!  People can be so heartless!!  I enjoyed the chapter very much and I can't wait for the next twist!! Keep up the good work!!!





Reviewer: kneewalkingturkeys Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2008 11:04 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 Homeward thoughts

There were so many enjoyable aspects to this chapter.The dead dog certainly bothered Shippo alot. Based on what  they had seen on the trailof the jewel, I was expecting half of the village to be slaughtered. It did attract the attention of the Yami-oba who appear to want to use Inuyasha against Sesshoumaru. I liked the way your wedding night scene. It shows how much they mean to each other. Despite all that they have been through they still want to be together.  Unfortunately, it appears that this is just a port in the storm and that events are conspiring against their happiness. 

 





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2008 11:45 pm
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10 Vows

Did someone pull a Carry on the wedding night?!





Reviewer: Roxotaku Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2008 11:22 pm
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10 Vows

Ah, perfect and beautiful! Again, for such a long chapter it went so fast! I loved the vows and the song - and a great cliff-hanger to make us all want more!

Author's Response: Song's a reworking of an actual Japanese song ca. 18thc, I believe, symbolic of good luck that was used for auspicious occasions like a wedding...me and my research and my cliffies!  LOL.





Reviewer: kmoaton Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2008 7:26 pm
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10 Vows

Good and the cliff hanger about the blood.  The wedding was beautiful and so romantic!!!  Can't wait for the next chapter.





Reviewer: MikoInuDemoness Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2008 6:10 pm
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9 Gatherings

I love this story can't wait for an update.





Reviewer: Roxotaku Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2008 9:32 am
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9 Gatherings

Awww...it went too fast! Beautiful job! I like the interactions of Hachi and Mushin - and Yoshiyukis reactions. I love the image of Kagome and InuYasha in thier wedding garb. Well, patiently waiitng for the next  chapter!





Reviewer: kmoaton Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2008 5:05 pm
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9 Gatherings

Nice!! It's weird for Inuyasha to be a loss of words.  I hope the wedding will be beautiful!!





Reviewer: kneewalkingturkeys Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2008 3:52 pm
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9 Gatherings

What we need is a kitsune free zone.

I enjoy your Mushin. He is very comfortable person to be with. I can see he and Hachi and Pink sitting around all

day drinking sake with the kitsunes. Mushin is not as demanding on Hachi as Miroku is. I never thought that I would see Hachi reciting poetry. He seems more like a

limerick can of tanuki.

       I loved the detail on the clothes of Inyasha and Kagome. Silver and black ,Raiders colors. You need to get on those artists like DEL does to draw the wedding picture. 



Author's Response: I promise you that it was just a drive by Kitsune.  Hachi's just dreaming about pretty little teashop women....the lyric was incidental! If she had been singing a limerick, he would have recited that...or a rap song.   LOL.  Yep.  I suspect Hachi finds Mushin much more relaxing to be around.  I did some hard research thinking about how to dress Inu.  Clothing styles then had such significance  and meant a lot about social position...He's actually dressed in middling high status casual clothes....but I also thought it would look more like the type of wedding clothes that Kagome would have thought appropriate from her time.  I too would like to see it done up.  Inu looks stunning in black.





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2008 2:23 pm
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8 Preparations

nya... what's up doc





Reviewer: Inuyashalover94 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 7:53 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8 Preparations

it is an awsome story i can't wait to see what happens next!!!





Reviewer: Roxotaku Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2008 10:40 pm
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7 A Last Quiet Evening

So glad to read the latest chapter! I loved it, as usual. I love the interactions between InuYasha and Kagome, Miroku and Sango. Very heart warming, and real. So were InuYashas anxieties and fears.





Reviewer: kneewalkingturkeys Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2008 10:16 pm
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7 A Last Quiet Evening

A Last Quiet Evening,huh? It does sound ominous. Glad

to Inuyasha and Kagome happy together if only for awhile

Your gobetweens are as devious as Sister Anglica's aunt in

Rumiko Takahashi's One Pound Gospel. Fortuitous events

which bring people together do not just happen do they. 



Author's Response: There definitely has been some sneaking around behind their backs...but once Inu got nudged in the right direction, he seems to have known what to do...;)





Reviewer: Roxotaku Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 12:20 am
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6 Coming Home

Just beautiful! I see you have been busy writing - good! I am so happy to see Inu and Kags talking about building a house and getting married! And Mushin found Ideura? Interesting...

Author's Response: Longest chapter I ever wrote...a little over 3000 words.  Busy, busy.  I can't believe I wrote so much this week...





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 1:57 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5 Grandmotherly Advice in the Morning

I don't like him already...just eat him and run, you know the youkai dine and dash, is ok the mother will probably only eat a limb or two.

Author's Response: LOL!  If they eat him and run, who will be my bad guy? 





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 7:07 am
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4 Night Discussions

the plot thickens

Author's Response: Of course!



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