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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2013 5:59 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was a perfect tie in to the manga. It flowed well and remained in character. It is always nice to see the little behind the scenes moments of InuYasha and Kagome as I am sure there are lots, and you pulled it off perfectly. Thank you for sharing :)





Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 2:23 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Oh mys!! That was sooo adorable!! Is a beautiful and very very touching story! I love how solid and portective Inuyasha was presented! A towering structure of strength for Kagome!

Loved the way he gently teased her about her marks. So sweet how they discussed Kagome staying in her time for the battle and her openess to Inuyasha about her devotion and love for him.

And yea... I get all goooey whenever Inuyasha rests his chin on Kagome's head.. Soooooo Romantic!! Swoons!!

I love each of your stories and every one of your poems!!

The depths of their bond and the way they don't need to say the words to each other outloud the way they fight so fluidly together!





Reviewer: Roxotaku Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 12:24 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

So, are you writing the ending to the manga itself? We are all waiting for the final battle from Takahashi - she is almost finished after 11 years -wow! But I like what you are doing here, will InuYasha be going back with her? I am curious to see what happens in your take on the story.

Author's Response: This may just be a one-shot..but I have a hankering for writing something that starts sometime around the time of Kaou and moves forward...but this is the first piece that came out of me...smack in the middle....





Reviewer: JediK1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 12:09 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

There are several long sentances, which give the story a rushed feeling.  Almost as though your brain was throwing out ideas and your fingers were trying to keep up!  The sentiment was there, though, and what beautiful sentiment it was!  This was very sweet; the perfect set-up for the ultimate battle!

Author's Response: Thanks...I do tend naturally towards long sentences...wrote a 154 word sentence in a humor piece I wrote the day before....least I'm not like Willima Faulkner and write one that goes  1 1/2 pages.... ;)





Reviewer: chanda Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2007 9:50 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Wow, great chapter. I loved it. Are you going to wait and post after the next magna comes out? Well until next time...

Chanda





Reviewer: freelke Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2007 7:44 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

very nice. thanks you very much for posting it here, I enjoyed it alot. Write more soon :)



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