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Reviewer: GrammyInuLvr Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2008 5:39 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2 Broken

Roxanne, that was beautiful.  I know it is supposed to be dark, but the emotions you conjure up with this are amazing. That last line had me misting.  As usual, great job! 

Author's Response: Thanks! I have to finish this old story some day. But when I was writing it I had the "evil bitch muse" as my muse, not my current muse, Lyris, the muse of hentai and comedy. It's kinda hard for her to handle a piece like this....





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 6:26 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 The Abduction

Yep. I couldnt help my self. But heyy I worked out this morning. DOes that help? lol Because I want more pie. haha must be my red background on here.

Author's Response: Red background - LOL!





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 3:45 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 The Abduction

Yes I agree and understand everything you just said. But heyy even though you muse was bitchy, she came out with one angsty looking story. ANd leaving me with the want of cherry pie. lol

=D



Author's Response: Glad you understand. My old muse loved angst, and I called her a bitch because she was always putting InuYasha and Kagome through such hell - that was her style. I might put up my old muses angst magnum opus here, but I want to revise the last two chapters. Cherry pie? After all you ate on Thanksgiving? LOL!





Reviewer: nika Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 1:36 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2 Broken

wow this is dark but really good i cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope I can produce, so many stories going at once....





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 1:22 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2 Broken

Whoa your one crazy mama.

Okay first off, HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!! This is such a nice and considerate gift. A new story. But darn women you muse is just killing you isnt it.  lol

But so far so good. But right now Im feeling depressed ..and fulll... my stomach hurts SOO much.

Hm.. but to me it seems they ..meaning Kagome really are a little out of character. In real life though I would think thats how she would react but...I dont know. I guess its true she is totally dependant on Inuyasha saving her in the end. So ... ha.. you know what I totally lost  my train of thought. I blame the turkey and the ham. But inthe end so far its good. Though my favorite is still the Job Description one.

=D



Author's Response: This is an OLD story - most of it was written over four years ago! Kagome isn't too OOC as far as I can tell, how else would she respond - could she have just kicked Naraku in the balls when he raped her? LOL! I think not...I'm just thinking of episode 126 of the anime, where the evil baby offspring  is trying to control her and she is thinking InuYasha won't be coming to rescue her. She has her miko powers, but he IS her protector, after all. My old evil bitch muse who gave me this story wanted her reaction to the rape to be true to life...so it is (though I've never been raped, thank god, LOL). Right now Job Description is my favorite one to be writing, too!



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