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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2014 3:28 am
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10

Oh goodness. This was incredibly hot and incredibly funny. I still have no idea what InuYasha and Kikyou were talking about in the beginning, but I do not care because it yielded glorious results.

I love the idea of these two not being able to keep their hands off of each other. It is a wonderful thought. I imagine after denying their sexual urges for so long they are bound to be quite ravenous. You played that off very well.

Then Miroku and Sango found out, and oh I love how that developed for them too. InuYasha and Kagome were the catalyst to Miroku and Sango doing it and that was amazing. Especially because everyone got to partake in the pleasure. 

 I especially loved the contest between the two couples, and the fact that Miroku stated it was just because Kagome was that way. Very funny.

 I bet InuYasha will remain quite pissed about Kagome having Miroku's son for quite some time. Even though Sango has his child, he will still remain a bit petulant that his woman was touched be another man. He's a rather possessive Inu after all. 

 Awesome job. Thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: NitroRockerSesu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2010 9:55 pm
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10

wait. did kaede get the babies mixed up or...? PLEASE SAY SHE DID!

Author's Response:

Nope....there is no mix up. My muse Lyris decided to make the ending totally UNEXPECTED. They were all having unprotected sex, and InuYasha did have sex with both girls as did Miroku....Hey, don't blame me, Lyris got carried away - LOL!





Reviewer: NitroRockerSesu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2010 10:24 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

over all good. one little thing. in one paragraph you spelled "cum" like "come" not meaning anything but just saying.





Reviewer: Inuyashalover94 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2008 7:36 am
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10

that is really funny!!!

Author's Response: Thank you - this was my first fanfic - but my comedy/hentai muse finished it this summer and turned it from a straight hentai into a hentai/comedy....





Reviewer: inukag4eva2008 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2008 11:53 pm
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6

uhhhh......a little odd. the chalenge was a little ...um...a... weird. it's okay, just odd. i doubt that they would really talk like that though.

Author's Response: All the characters are a little OOC in this story, more sexually charged and confident than in the anime/manga (except for Miroku, of course, LOL). This was a story of sexual exploration - but no yaoi - talk about OOC, yaoi is REALLY OOC.





Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2007 5:00 pm
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10

Hold on let me pick my face up off the floor...this has to be the MOST funny pornish fic I've ever read.  Whats more you managed to pull this off with out all the weirdness that seems to come along with some of the other smutfests that I've read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Without all the weirdness huh? Well, that's good to hear! I don't do yaoi, and a lot of fans like that, but I like the yuri aspects of this story, I thought that was hot so I continued it after I wrote the original 3 chapters over four years ago. My muse turned it into a comedy and I just went with it, glad you enjoyed it.



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