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Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2009 4:41 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: InuYasha's Doll Pt. 1

On little part is confusing. When they get to the village, and sango interrupts...why is that creepy? Shes walking and petting Kirara, whose a cat? Why is petting Kirara while walking with Kagome creepy? Confused. Other than that, despite the fact that I have no idea what's really going on because you are keeping us little readers in the dark, I really enjoyed it. its very cute.
  Other than that...


Author's Response: *chuckles* You've never grown up on any James Bond 007 movies, have you? Or even seen the Austin Powers movies (which is a parody of it)? Dang, you've been missing out. The villain -Ernst Stavro Blofeld- in certain James Bond movies and the Austin Powers villain have a cat. They are seen holding the cat. They are discussing/plotting their evil, horrible plans while stroking the cat (mostly you would only see just the villain's hands, never his face, as he stroked the cat) hence the creepiness with Sango and Kirara. She's giving off vibes like she's plotting evil plans. Sorry that this humour was beyond you. Here is a list of those James Bond movies if you wish to fully understand: You Only Live Twice, On Her Majesty's Secret Service, Diamonds Are Forever, For Your Eyes Only (not the main villain), and Never Say Never Again.





Reviewer: Ayamegusa Anonymousstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2008 10:47 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: InuYasha's Doll Pt. 1

A good start Nikkie! Your stories are always lovable. 'Emotionally constipated'? That made me laugh. There were times when you mixed the present tense and past tense of words. But it's still good.

If you want to, I could fix some of those for you. 



Author's Response: I love the help! *eyes sparkly* Thanks so much for both the offer and for the review! Inuyasha is rather... retentive about his emotions. :)





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 12:27 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: InuYasha's Doll Pt. 1

Very very nice! The only complaint that I kinda have, well, would be about the grammer. There are several errors throughout the story. Other than that, the only thing I can say is that I really liked it a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am trying to get those naughty little errors out! I'm really glad you are enjoying it!!





Reviewer: Knittingknots Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2007 8:33 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: InuYasha's Doll Pt. 1

What a neat story...waiting for pt. 2!  Bouncing up and down...what  a nice lady is Higurashi Mama-san!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad you are ejoying it! In part two I delve into the history of Mama and Kagome's Father and embellished quite a bit. Hopefully making Mama into an intelligent woman instead of a flighty woman. She is a wonderful woman!! I tried for tender and romantic and for putting Kikyou into a better light.. Just wait until he starts his sewing...rnrn



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