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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2013 10:43 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love Gives, Love Takes

With all love comes uncertainty, but you can tell if it's true if you're willing to risk your heart in order to go after something you can't foresee the end of. You've showed that really well here and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing :)





Reviewer: GENNY Anonymousstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2008 2:06 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love Gives, Love Takes

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2007 9:14 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love Gives, Love Takes

Awww!!! Sooo sweet! Really good.

You truly kept within Inuyasha's characteristics while writing this. Very good, Sweetie.

Luv Ya, JA NE





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome[Not logged in] Anonymousstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2007 6:39 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love Gives, Love Takes

You know I dont know why I dont just log in. lol

Ne ways to the review.

I liked  it. You picked an incredible song. It fit so well to Inuyasha.

But ..[lol the dreaded but. ].. there are some mess ups in it. All basically spelling or grammer. Or you repeated stuff. like in the first paragraph..you said begging instead of beginning.. then in the same sentence you said the same thing twice.

Im not trying to be annoying or rude.. just letting you know. But in the end you did a great job.  Especially for your 1st song fic.

XD



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I knew the song was just right for Inuyasha as soon as I heard it.

Don't worry, I'm not insulted by what you said about my spelling and grammer, because I know you're probably right. It always takes me a few times looking over my stuff before I find and fix all the errors in it, and by that time it's often already posted. I promise I'll work on fixing it up though.



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