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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2013 3:22 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Short Walk Toward Forever

I enjoyed this very much! I believe personal experience plays to the best emotions when writing and that shows in your work very much. The joint wedding was also a very nice touch. Kudos and thanks for sharing!





Reviewer: vampire liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 2:40 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Short Walk Toward Forever

this was very good. a fun read. when my father remarried, he cried at the wedding. only time i've ever seen him do it, too. hope you are a happy couple. well written, and a fun read. also, exceedingly sweet. got to love the fluff. no mistakes i found...except one. there is an a in aisle. what you wrote is isle as in island. not quite the same. ha ha. fun mental picture though, if oyu get one.

Author's Response: Oopps!  Yeah, that does make a funny mental picture!  I will go back and fix that- thank you!  Also, thank you so much for the review and the blessing!  I hope that your father is very happy as well! :)



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