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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2013 10:55 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was really amazing. I felt so bad that Kagome and InuYasha had lost their fire, I even was a bit concerned over the state of their relationship for awhile. But they clearly loved each other enough to see each other through the rough times which you portrayed really well, I like how willing they were to work on themselves it was very sweet. And then each sttempt at role play ended up failing them and it just seemed like everything was going down hill fast. Then their argument in the hospital occurred and it was clear to me that their passion came back! You lead up to the ending perfectly and I enjoyed the journey! Thank you for sharing :)





Reviewer: beckyducky Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 12:47 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Hi Momo-sama!!  You probably dont remember me but i reviewed on one of your mir-kag fics!! 

you rock at lemons and humor!! 

 

'nuff said!!  Please keep going and writing more fanfics!! 





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2007 3:43 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

HAHA! Well I agree if they think the fire was gone before. Its gonnna go POOF!

lol

But hey there fictional it may be possible for them.

I loved this fix it was just a perfect comedy story.  I would  love to see this as lik a movie or episode of a show. The story line was perfect for it.

Great job.



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