Date: June 15, 2014 10:35 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter Five
Well, if my heart wasn't broken from this then I would have to assume that I was heartless. This was so tragic. Poor Kagome. Poor InuYasha. Poor Kaede. Poor everybody. I don't even know who I feel the most pain over, probably InuYasha; because he is the one left alive with memories that will forever haunt him. But then again I feel so bad for Kagome because she lived her entire life thinking she had a long road ahead of her only for it to be cut short and for her to find love that she would never be able to experience. That was heartbreaking as well.
You had such an emotionally driven story here, and you played it off very well. It all flowed well, and I didn't want to stop reading. You really know how to wrench someone's stomach up into their throat. Amazing!
Thanks for sharing.
Date: October 31, 2008 10:33 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter Two
I love this story so much. It actually made me cry which I don't really do much anymore. You really got emotion out of this and that shows your talents. Good luck with any future stories you write.
Date: December 29, 2007 7:18 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter One
You had a very good plot, and the story in itself was well thought up, but I find that you kinda breezed through the chapters a bit too quickly. I loved the ending though. really a heart wrencher.