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Reviewer: Patty530 Signedstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2007 8:58 am
Chapter number: 15
Title: Epilogue

Thank you so much for sharing. This was a wonderful read.

Luv, Patty





Reviewer: Hester.Lewis. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2007 4:28 pm
Chapter number: 15
Title: Epilogue

oh wow!i love that 1 it was so sweet!you should write about what happened after that!inuyasha and kagome could tell each other how they feel!and sango and miroku too!we need to hear about that part!PLEASE?i really want to hear more!please email me too! my adress is lewis_hester13@hotmail.com please add me!your a real good writer!probably the best i've ever read!bye for now!...finish the story please!you would get alot of readers!bye

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much for the review!  Unfortunately, I will not be continuing this story.  Once I thought that I might, but I am satisfied with it as is, and I'm afraid that if I try to write a sequel it just won't be as good!  If you liked this, be sure to check out some of my other stuff as well!





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2007 5:59 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Sweetie, You are so very welcome. It was well deserved.





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2007 5:34 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Very good story, although Kikyo wasn't all that evil towards the end just before her demise in the original manga. Otherwise she would NEVER have left her bow & arrow strategically placed for Kagome to find in movie # 4.

I truly hope that you eventually write a sequel. It would be nice to find out exactly how Kagome's last nightmare ended. That episode with Inuyasha's sword....does she or doesn't she take her life. How would this act or react with her final outcome in being able to wake up?

All in all, though, this little piece of work was very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings.

JA NE.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  This was actually my first InuYasha fanfic, back when I first starting getting into the anime series on Adult Swim.  I didn't know the characters very well at that point, but I felt inspired to start writing.  As for the final dream...I thought it best to leave a little mystery with that, to help with the suspense when she woke up.  :)  The idea was, though, if she took her life in the dream, then the poison would have worked.  When she heard InuYasha's voice, he gave her the strength to break free of that last nightmare.

Again, thank you so much for the review!  





Reviewer: magedelbene Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2007 7:10 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Like it a lot, I agree with Knittngknots a very dark view of Kikyo. Love the idea. Would like to read your new stories and a sequel for this one. There are things unsaid left. Good job :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review!  It was definately a dark view of her.  This was back when I first starting watching the anime, and Kikyo was working with Naraku at that point.  This was my first attempt at IY fanfic, hence some mis-references and a little OOC-ness.  But thank you so much for the review!  I love feedback! :)





Reviewer: Knittingknots Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 8:13 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Good suspense, good action.  An interesting concept.  I don't normally think of Kikyo quite so darkly (except fairly early in the story), but as you set it up, it works well.  You did a good job.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I wrote this when I first started watching the anime, so it was at that point in the storyline where Kikyo appeared as a dark character.  You nailed that one!  Thank you again for the lovely reviews!!  I love to get feedback!! :)





Reviewer: Knittingknots Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 6:23 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Good, suspensiveful introduction. Now I want more!



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