Reviews For Youkai InuYasha
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Reviewer: GrammyInuLvr Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2008 4:28 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prepare

Wow.  I'm in awe.  You are such an awesome poet!  Great job!





Reviewer: InuGrrrl Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08, 2007 4:52 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prepare

Nice! My motto has always been, "If I can picture it, then it's good." and I can see this -definitely. Great job; I enjoy the dark undertones very much.





Reviewer: sixsix Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2007 11:56 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prepare

this is a very good piece of work. you really captured inuyasha's self when he's a youkai





Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 11:53 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prepare

Oh my!! That was quite the poem!! Love the new twists and tweaks you did with this!! Glomp!! Oh my!! Shivers!! That was amazing!!





Reviewer: vampire liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 3:16 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prepare

wow, you have creepy moments, huh. i like it, though i find the sometimes there sometimes not rhyme scheme hard to follow, i love the last verse from 'look into those eyes' especially.

Author's Response: This poem in its first incarnation started out as free verse...it's got choppy scansion...the rhythm pattern is not smooth and flowing...that may be the jarring you're feeling.





Reviewer: Ayamegusa Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 2:54 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prepare

Your poety just send tingles down my spine.

Author's Response: Good!  It was supposed to!



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