Date: August 14, 2007 7:17 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1
firstly sorry i didnt comment your last thing you posted. believe, i read it, but i just got my wisdom teeth pulled a few days and i felt so miserable (its really uncomfortable) that i was being to bitter to make any nice comments about anything to anyone. i liked it though. actually, i really like this one a lot. its so cute and i love the last line. its also done in a sweet way, rather than any sour lemon. sometimes you need a sour break. very nice
Author's Response: Ack! Recovering from that is an excuse in itself....Sometimes, we need pleasant moments. There's enough angst in the world....so the comic imp comes out in me....