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Reviewer: secretly evil Signedstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2008 1:18 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Familliar Face

it was cute





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2007 7:46 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Familliar Face

The story's plot is good, sweetie, but it needs a little bit of work. It's just a tad rushed, as if you were afraid of not being able to finish it. And try spacing your phrases., so that there's a separation between the paragraphs. The small lemon was pretty good, though ( my hentai side).

Keep writing, sweetie, 'cause I'll be looking for more of your works.

 

Luv ya & leave ya. JA NE.





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 9:04 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Familliar Face

Aww she had morals... how sweet.
She wanted to wait...I think thats so crazii.
I respect how they live.
GO KAGOME!
lol
ANd I think you did pretty good on the E.S [lol thats my short form]
YOu know when I read the Summary Iwas kinda expecting like and AR You kno bcaz it sound like Inu still lik Kikyou.. girl you scared me for a moment. I thought he was still stuck n kikz i was lik... NOOO! lol
well g2g.
needs to get ready 2 party!
lol ;)



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