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Reviewer: King Baka Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2015 4:26 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue

*my head explodes*

ERMAHGERD indeed. Really looking forward to this!

This scene was in the original, if I'm not mistaken. It's a great prologue - just a taste of a complicated father/son relationship which defines some of Inuyasha's character later on...in only 500 words.

Author's Response:

I take no responsibilitiy for exploding heads.

"Heavily revised" may be a bit misleading. Much of the story has remained the same to the original, but what I've revised is the telling of the story (which is my roundabout way of saying I hacked out some of the wordiness and phrasing issues I had before). You'll recognize most of the story, with a few tweaks here and there for continuity purposes. Maybe an additional scene or three. :) Thank you so much for the great review, and I hope you enjoy the ride. 



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