Date: September 14, 2015 11:26 pm
Chapter number: 1
*my head explodes*
ERMAHGERD indeed. Really looking forward to this!
This scene was in the original, if I'm not mistaken. It's a great prologue - just a taste of a complicated father/son relationship which defines some of Inuyasha's character later on...in only 500 words.
I take no responsibilitiy for exploding heads.
"Heavily revised" may be a bit misleading. Much of the story has remained the same to the original, but what I've revised is the telling of the story (which is my roundabout way of saying I hacked out some of the wordiness and phrasing issues I had before). You'll recognize most of the story, with a few tweaks here and there for continuity purposes. Maybe an additional scene or three. :) Thank you so much for the great review, and I hope you enjoy the ride.