Reviews For Night Sky
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Reviewer: King Baka Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2015 11:56 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Short and sweet, but IMO a very in-character look at post-manga interaction between them. I could totally see a kiss (their first?) developing this way. I like your writing style - varying sentence structure, etc.

Author's Response: "Very in-character" I'm so pleased you thought so! It's something I like to try and get right, if nothing else. Quite possibly a first kiss scenario, yes! ;) I definitely wanted to try and portray a new found level of intimacy between the two.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2015 2:37 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Very cute, I can definitley see it leading to more but it also works very well as a stand alone piece.

 



Author's Response: Thank you! Won't rule out expanding on it but I'm so glad you think so. :)





Reviewer: InuLuffer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2015 8:09 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This is so sweet. Please write more. I would love to read it from Kagome's point of view. I would also love for you to continue this story. It is very well written, my heart started pounding right along with Inuyasha's. I was thinking lean in! Lean in! Don't let her pull away! Looking forward to more. Hint hint! Lol

Author's Response: Thank you so much me dear! I didn't expect such a positive response for this; it was so short! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) I'd like to add a bit more to this, just can't promise anything at the moment. It's my goal right now to get a full on chapter fic in motion, hopefully sooner rather than later.



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