Date: April 05, 2015 9:49 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Herbal Essence
Aw, this was so cute. Love the image of Inuyasha stalking Kagome in the woods. It's nice to read something that details their post-canon married life. There really aren't enough stories like this one, and I felt that you kept them totally in character.
As for the language, as far as I'm concerned, you are fluent. For comparison, I grew up raised by a Spanish grandmother and my entire family speaks Spanish, but I can barely understand it. Just last year, I was taking a Spanish class, and instead of saying "I put my make-up on", I said "I butter myself", hahaha. Thank you for sharing =D
Author's Response: thnx for the nice review. Glad you like this one. I laughed at your Spanish translation. That was indeed really funny. haha