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Reviewer: sabella_1 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2015 1:25 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Dead to Me

Glad that you made this a happy ending instead.  This story was unpredictable. I really enjoyed it alot.  Great job!





Reviewer: woahbob Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2014 11:31 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Dead to Me

I enjoy your descriptions...they don't turn me off frankly. I hate seeing desperation or the same types of descriptions because it makes me believe this story will be the same as that OTHER pirate Inuyasha story I read lol. Very to the point and leaves so much to be discovered. Oh, and I love this story haha it was very riveting and yummy lol!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! =D Glad to hear someone likes my one sentence of descriptiveness, haha.





Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2014 11:35 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Dead to Me

Oh my God, honey. This is the first story written by you that I had the chance to read. To be completely honest with you, I wasn't sure at first because the summary sounded pretty vague but then I saw the warnings and word count and I thought, yeah, this is going to be so good. And I was right! I don't know if I enjoyed it so much because I seem to be in the right mood for dark stories lately or because you're so talented you'd make any WAFF lover become obsessed with dark content. Probably the second option. Seriously, I was hooked from the start.

You know I'm a smut lover and I've read tons of mature stories but girl, your lemons were -- WOAH. I mean, you made Inuyasha hotter than he already is, if that's even possible.

And the characterization. Man. By the time the plot thickens, I am like, "OH MY GOD, KAGOME YOU'RE SO NUTS!" (because really, Stockholm Syndrome at first sight) but a couple minutes later I'm really like, "FUCKING SHIT INUYASHA IS ACTUALLY EVEN WORSE!" And then you add the gory details and I need popcorn.

I won't give this story a 10 outta 10 though, not because I'm nasty like that but I'm so jealous! Haha. Just kidding. No, the truth is that after I read the end note I felt kind of disappointed because as much as I'm a sucker for happy endings, I think this one-shot truly deserved an ending as breathtaking and panic-inducing as the acidic scenes in it.

Good job!

Author's Response: I was so, so close to giving this the original ending, but like I've mentioned, I straight up flip out when there's no happy ending. I'm just not strong enough to write out a bad ending, even if it is a full-circle poetic one, haha. Thank you for your praise! I'm blushing <3 I do have a problem with summaries. For the life of me, I just cannot figure out a way to make things sound interesting without giving too much away.  Thanks for reading and enjoying!





Reviewer: rmsm28rmsm28 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2014 2:48 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Dead to Me

Omg! :D
Thanks for the treat! Really enjoyed it. I have to say though, this one actual made me stop and cringe a few times. I loved the intensity,especially the camera flashing just made it seem real exotic in my head. The gory details were a little hard to stomach... but did that stop me from reading and re-reading... no...
The ending seemed out of place, but if you asked me what else you could have put there, I wouldn't be able to say :/
The beginning and up until the Kikyo part was super intriguing. Your alternative ending would have been more appropriate, but I enjoy happy endings as well :D
What kind of person am I turning into, sigh* -_-'

On a side note, I've been meaning to say, your summery's never do your stories justice. I've actually skimmed past your stories many time's before, but never bothered clicking because the summary's sounded ... not very exciting. I'm so glad I clicked on Strictly Taboo. I've been hooked on all your story's since! I've read them all and always read your updates. I don't even bother finding out what the stories about. So long as I see your name is on it, I start reading ASAP! :D

Author's Response: Haha, I know I'm terrible at summaries. I just sort of despise that click bait thing everyone has going on and I guess I intentionally make it vague just 'cause. A lot of fan fiction writers do this dumb thing where they have a description like: "Say what? Kagome and Inuyasha and the gang are in high school in the modern era? Who got who pregnant? And who's this mysterious force trying to break Inuyasha and Kagome apart???? (hint: it's always Naraku and/or Kikyo) Will they make it through or will they crash and burn (the title is most likely 'crash and burn')? READ TO FIND OUT" and then they ask for the readers' ideas on every freaking chapter and those are the ones that tend to get reviews, and I consider that cheating. I'd rather be different, even if my version of different is not appealing to most. I was homeschooled, I can't help it, hahaha. Thinking up an ending where I didn't end up killing either Inuyasha or Kagome was hard, but I personally freak out whenever I read something that doesn't have a happy ending and it gives me bad feelings for DAYS, even if that's the only ending that makes sense. But thanks for your support! Just think of me as that thing that makes you uber hipstery. An indie writer for a rapidly fading fandom. Your friends have definitely never heard of me, and now you're totally cool because you know something they don't. ;D And I like making people cringe. Getting a reaction out of this generation is hard to do, haha.



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