Reviews For The Deadly Siren
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Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2014 10:43 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 2

It was pretty good but it looks like your making her seem more like Kikyou. She doesn't have that wild fun spirit that Kagome has. Yes in the story she was raised differently, doesn't have a family but her personality just seems way different. Your writing is good and you follow the story perfectly throw. But your jumping ahead so fast in the story I wonder where you going next

Author's Response: this story is all about change, you just gotta let it happen. Thank you for both of your reviews :)

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