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Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2014 7:41 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Undisclosed Desires

I'm actually enjoying your reject stories. They are horrible and disturbing yet wonderful at the same time. It's a situation that if it were real life it would be so beyond taboo and disgusting that most people would never find any sort of redeeming situation in it. Yet at the same time, because it's fiction there's almost a certain beauty to it. I don't really know if I'm explaining properly but the stories are so intriguing that they've kept me gripped tight until the very end. Maybe it's the emotional quality to them that holds me in it's grasp or maybe I'm in the mood for something a bit more dark rather than light and fluffy at the moment. I hope to read more from you in the future both the dark and the light.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I like exploring horrible things. Maybe it's because I've read too many prom or wedding or courtship or princess stories without any plot other than blossoming love, but I've found myself more interested in creating things people don't even think about. I have no idea where it comes from, but I like writing it. My next story isn't quite as dark as what I've been doing lately and is very short, but hopefully you enjoy it.





Reviewer: Harmony Sunsinger Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2014 10:19 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Undisclosed Desires

I wouldnt call that a bad ending. Sure its got bad elements, but its predominantly good IMO. And Naraku as the devil - or a Crowley stand-in, do you watch Supernatural? - is a near idea. Never really seen that one before. I liked the twist, kept asking myself what the hell happened that he kept hinting at. I really can't believe you don't enjoy incest, with as much as you like to write it lol.

Author's Response: Haha, I know it's super hard to believe. I also don't like butt stuff but somehow that keeps working its way in there. I'll confess I've always been fascinated at the whole morbid nature of incest, but it still grosses me out. And no, I don't watch Supernatural even though my friends have been begging me to for literally as many years as its been on the air, haha.



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