Date: July 25, 2014 10:46 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Good Boy
I'm not sure what to say about this one. Not my favorite, but that's probably because its a lot dirtier and nastier than I tend to like. But like I've said before, you're your own worst critic. It was written well and I didn't catch that many typos. I'd say Good job, and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: I really, really did not like this one. I wrote it at like 3 in the morning a few months ago, woke up, reread it, and nearly deleted it. But I decided what the heck, someone might like it. So here it is.