Date: July 21, 2014 7:02 pm
Chapter number: 1
I think it's good! Kind of appalled by the... Whole middle part there, and Kagome is ridiculously OOC, but Inuyasha to me is crazy on point. Cause he's such an awkward bundle of walking, yelling teenage hormones in the manga/anime too. Haha, well done! And I could tell at some parts that it hadn't been proofed, but for the most part your writing was very satisfying. You worry too much, m'dear!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I decided to post all my reject ideas and make a thing of it. There are so many! Shot Week will be all about quantity over quality. Haha, I've been told I'm my own worst critic, like seriously, the things I think about what I write are so impolite and dreadfully rude and I hurt my own feelings *sadface*. Imo, all the stories I'll be posting this week are absolutely gross and I definitely wouldn't read them, though for some reason I get a kick out of writing them. Thanks for reviewing, as always!