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Reviewer: Furostomi-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2015 10:03 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh! Wow, just wow. This was an amazing story I totally loved your version of the mating ritual; the mutual truth spoken in it. I always love a good green grocer who know how to sell the citrus fruits. It just flowed so organically it didn't feel forced and I loved that the ending was only the beginning. So wonderful and fulfilling to read even though it was a one shot. Perhaps we humble readers will get lucky, and the muse that inspired this will visit you again one day for encore.
Also, you did very well as self-beta I didn't see any glaring errors that stood out, another testament to your fine writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I never rule out a sequel even though at this moment I am more focused on my WIPs, but if an idea strikes I'm sure it will end up here.





Reviewer: Bobcat Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2015 9:53 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This is a pretty good story.  So glad I found it.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you!





Reviewer: QueSeraMara Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2014 10:52 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Kagome really would go to the ends of the earth for her love. Great job! Definitely a new favorite. Keep up the great work. =D

Author's Response: Thanks!I'm glad you liked it.





Reviewer: Misarae Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 10:41 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

*sighs in utter contentment*  You scared me a bit with that first part!  But I had faith.. and it was rewarded!  I especially like the way you had Inu Yasha's real life seeping into his dream around the edges.  Although calling himself Miroku.. XD  Great idea, and I will always appreciate setups for citrus.  Although.. *looks at some of her notes*  Fandom hivemind strikes again!  *mock grumble*  I'm afraid I'm utter trash at editing suggestions, but squee.. that I can do!  Bravo!  :D

Author's Response: Yeah, it was hard picking what name he would use for himself. I figured Sesshomaru would just feel wrong and Souta or even Shippou wouldn't work, but I thought that he probably had enough good feelings towards Miroku that the name would seems positive enough to him that it wouldn't mess up the dream. I'm glad you enjoyed and that you felt your faith rewarded. I cannot write a fic where IY and Kag don't get their happy ending. They earned it gosh darn it! No matter how bad it gets if there is one thing you can count on with me is that they will get their happily ever after in some fashion. rnrnAnyway thanks for taking the time to review. They always brighten my day!





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 12:02 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was really cute, I think it was fairly understandable as well, I didn't have any problems anyway. I'm glad it didn't leave you alone because it was truly enjoyable.

It was an interesting spell that he was hit with. Obviously it took things from his mind to create his dream but things weren't anything like what he was truly used to experiencing and wasn't even really like anything in his reality. 

I like how Keade basically told him to get over himself and do what both needed to be done and what he truly wanted to do. The lemon at the end was also really sweet. Fantastic work, keep it up.



Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for taking the time to review! I'm glad it was understandable and that you enjoyed it. I'm also glad it was obvious that the spell used things in his head like names as it built his dreams. The biggest worry I had was confusion about all the familiar names being used but how they were with the wrong people. Anyway, thanks again.





Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 5:21 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was very well done. I loved the style you used to write this story, it really made it mesh and flow perfectly. Also I want to give you a big kudos for such a unique mating ritual. From the words, to the bite placements, to the markings; I haven't read anything like it so far in this fandom and it was really refreshing. Very well done, keep up the great work and Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it wasn't confusing and that you thought it flowed well. I'm glad you liked my ritual too. I'm always trying to think up ones that are a little different than ones I have seen before. Anyway, thanks again for taking the time to review and I am really glad you enjoyed it.



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