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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 8:11 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Very well done, especially for your first oneshot! I really liked the setting, I haven't read a lot of 1920s based fics revolving around InuYasha and Kagome. It fit them very well. Their interactions were fun and flirty with an overlying air of sophistication that just worked for them. I especially liked that Kagome was the club owner, a rarity in those times and she would have done it perfectly! Great characterizations, dialogue, and plot; it all complemented the others well! Great job, and keep up the fantastic work. Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: Oh! and thank you so much for reading. All of these wonderful reviews make it worth while. I'm currently thinking about extending this oneshot into a little series, nothing too big! but I want to do something. You were right and saying how easily Kagome and InuYasha fit into the 1920's, really this story wrote itself. Lets just hope I can keep the same vibe going with my next stories.





Reviewer: QueSeraMara Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2014 10:44 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was so cute! Very good for a first oneshot. Definitely adding to my favorites. Keep them up! Great work.

Author's Response: Wow, one of your favorite?! Thank you so much. I really wanted to give it my all. And don't worry more works are on the way, just have to get the nerve to finally post them like I did this one. Thank you again for reading.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2014 1:40 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

That was really cute. Well written and I could easily picture a 20's bar.

 



Author's Response: Awe thank you so much, I'm very new at writing fanfiction so that really means a lot to me.





Reviewer: Sessdoll Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2014 4:51 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

make it more than a oneshot please.

Author's Response: I'm really debating about it, I may just make a series based on the oneshot, but I don't know just yet. If I don't make it a series then at least a few other sequels behind it.:)





Reviewer: KeiChanz Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2014 4:47 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Hey there! I really enjoyed this oneshot. It was cute, sassy, charming, and funny all at once, definitely an accomplishment! =] Well done and keep up the good work "dollface." Lol. ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so much!All the points you described was exactly what I was trying to get across. Also,I must tell you that dollface comment made me squeal like a teenage girl at a justin beiber concert. It was loud and high pitched and I'm not even ashamed. lol rnrnBut again thank you, your review means the world to me. :)



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