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Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2014 10:58 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I don't know why I love the dark fics you write this much. I think you're really skilled, honey.

And the happy ending here - well, as 'happy' as living in the woods with a semi-crazed half-demon can be - makes much more sense than in your Halloween fic, especially given then fact that Kagome is extremely unhappy and a total outcast whose father was some kind of ugly pedophile.

Yes, I'm so rating this up. PEOPLE WHO DIDN'T READ THIS ARE LIVING UNDER A ROCK. Everything about this is perfect. And the pervert in me adored the part where Kagome gets kidnapped in her wedding dress and then woah, there goes the dress and here comes the hot sex in the forest.

I'm happy.





Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2014 6:14 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

That was dark, but it was really good. I like that InuYasha really was her guardian angel in a sense, and even though she thought his actions were heinous he only did it to spare her. I also like that he only hurt those out to get her, I mean if he were truly a monster he probably would have killed Hojo just for looking at her. This story was really well done, it has such depth to it and it made for such an intriguing story. I loved it!! Thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: Inufan82 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2013 10:09 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

A great story!  I'd love to see you rewrite this from Inu's point of view as well though, that way we'd get to learn more anout Inuyasha's side of things.  Seeing both sides of the story together would be extremely interesting, of course that's just my take on things, since it is already a wonderful story as is!





Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2013 7:38 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Nice twist, having InuYasha kill Kagome's father to protect her was not what I had been expecting. The line about him waiting until the next morning so she could see was very sweet, and the fact that Hojo wasn't injured for just being near Kagome shows that InuYasha is more angel than monster. You had great detail that subtly showed InuYasha's true nature, and it was a great addition having Kagome think InuYasha a monster simply because of the things she had heard from others. I enjoyed this thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: earthgodness Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2013 1:04 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

That was an interesting piece.



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