Reviews For Come Here Boy
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Reviewer: IndigoArcher89 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2014 11:52 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Come Here Boy

This was really good! Not too sappy, but still gentle enough to be their first time. You were right in your author's note about humans not having heats. There is debate in the scientific community, but some think that human females experience a period of higher sexual drive called estrus. Unlike in dogs, ours does not occur during menstration. Also, the power/aura of a miko is called reiki. All in all, I really enjoyed this oneshot! Great work :)

P.S. Clever penname!





Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2014 12:28 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Come Here Boy

Oh wow! I think words might fail me during this review, but I'll try and get my praise out anyway. This was astounding. From beginning to end I was hooked in such a way that I just could not put down this story. You definitely have a talent for this, and it shines. Seriously this story was hot and amazing; I am just in awe over it all! Every detail of this story was fantastically done and I hope you know that you have an incredible gift! Thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: scherezade Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2013 12:55 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Come Here Boy

Thanks!





Reviewer: earthgodness Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2013 7:56 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Come Here Boy

That was beautiful



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