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Reviewer: WisteriaButterflies Signedstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2013 11:19 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Knowledge Burns

This was pretty good. I didn't see too many typos, and the prose wasn't too purple. It was good. I liked it.

Author's Response: Yay for liking it! :D But, I must say, if you saw <i>any</i> typos, please tell me so I can fix them! :) I would really appreciate it. Thanks for the review, and again, I'm so glad you liked it :D





Reviewer: earthgodness Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2013 8:10 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Knowledge Burns

Not bad. I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed :)





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2013 12:18 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Knowledge Burns

Interesting, I'm not sure how I feel about it right now. I don't dislike it but I don't know if I like it yet. I can see it growing on me though. It was a very well written piece but I guess I feel like it's missing part of the plot, like I'm missing part of the story, whether it's background or something else I'm not sure though. I would love to see what else you come up with.

Author's Response: I definitely see what you mean there! It does seem like there's something missing, and I'll work on that. I might just make another chapter of this, another installment maybe, explaining things a bit more. :) I'll be sure to let you know if that happens!  However, I'm glad you don't dislike it! Thanks for the honest feedback :) It made my day.  



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