Date: November 28, 2014 10:45 pm
Chapter number: 18
Title: Chapter 18 - Batteries Required
First of all I wanted to say here that I am a super fan of your story , I really fall in love with this story , I hope you have not given this story up, because I am waiting impatiently for a new chapter! I know there are probably still be more people here who feel the same way as I do, I hope that you will soon update ,, with much love
Date: April 15, 2014 5:56 pm
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16 - Breaking the Bed
Another great chapter, the bed breaking absolutely cracked me up. I decided to re-read the whole thing rather than just the last few chapters and it was definitely worth it. This story makes me giggle and it's very well written. Both of their insecurities are there although Inuyasha's definitely start out stronger. I can't wait to see what you have planned for them next, keep up the amazing work.
Date: May 21, 2013 6:35 pm
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15 - Next Time
Loved it!! Honest to God I didn't think I'll do more than LIKE it...but damn...I seriously do love this haha...
Maybe they should burry the damn used condoms xD I demand more sex!! lol jk... well not really. gah - between all my ramblings i can clearly say I love and enjoy this =)
Date: May 14, 2013 11:01 am
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15 - Next Time
Giggles, the orgy at the shrine... I can only imagine. I have a feeling that explaining that to Miroku would only get him way too excited. Another great chapter with a nice fluffy lemon this time and some extra fluff there at the end sprinkled with comedy throughout. I can't wait to see what you do next.
Date: May 12, 2013 9:30 am
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14 - All the Way
Another phenomenal chapter, I loved Inuyasha'a line about breaking his dick, it was hilarious. Very well written lemon, just a bit of fluff there at the end, perfect. I can't wait to see what you do next. Keep up the amazing work.
Date: May 09, 2013 9:26 pm
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13 - Filter in Need of Service
Giggles again, her ire at Miroku was fantastic. I'm glad she didn't get too pissed at Inuyasha, because he obviously didn't intend it the way it came out. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the amazing work.
Date: May 07, 2013 3:06 pm
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12 - Cleared for Entry
Oh poor Yash, his last line there has me dying of laughter. I can only imagine what Kagome's reaction is going to be. I also loved their interplay at the store in the last chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the amazing work.
Date: May 04, 2013 10:43 am
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10 - Protection is Important
Giggles and smiles throughout the whole chapter. I am so glad they had that conversation about Inuyasha's insecurities and Kagome's thoughts. It was definitely needed. The bit there at the end about Shippo was adorable. Keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: May 01, 2013 3:07 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8 - Subjugation Can Be Fun
Poor Inuyasha and his insecurities, you've kept him really in character in my opinion. Kagome doesn't seem to realize just how deep those insecurities run which is a little sad. She seems slights OOC to me but not in a bad way. I can't wait to see what you do next and I hope they can communicate without getting into too big of a fight.
Date: April 18, 2013 1:59 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5 - Even the Most Beautiful Garden Needs Care
Another great chapter. I loved the fluffiness of it. To me you captured both of their characters perfectly, misunderstanding each other because of a lack of communication. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work.
Date: April 16, 2013 6:20 am
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4 - Her Body is a Buffet and He Was Starving
Another fantastic chapter. I loved her little break down there at the end. It was unexpected and even Kagome couldn't tell him why, which made me laugh. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work.
Date: April 08, 2013 4:23 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2 - It's Not as Bad as You'd Think
Well, I wasn't expecting Kagome to go all dominant on him, I had expected some of the interaction, her wanting him back for example but definitely not her show of dominance. I can't wait to see what you have planned and I'm not even going to try to guess at this point. Great chapter and I'm very excited for the next one.
Date: March 29, 2013 2:44 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 - You Should Always Lock the Door
Fantastic, I can't wait for her reaction in the next chapter. I almost feel bad for him considering how bad he's got to be panicking right now but this was a fantastic chapter. I giggled through most of it and really can't wait to see where you go from here.