Date: February 08, 2013 12:35 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting start, I can't wait to see where you go with this. I could feel Inuyasha's lonliness and surprise so brownie points for the emotional aspect. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: mmmm Brownies ;) But seriously TY. I like to get immersed in a story and feel with the characters so my writing tends to work that way also. rnrn2nd chap up.