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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2014 3:48 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: For Compoundbreadd

That all makes perfect sense, and the vague/confusing aspect works very well with your story. It kind of gives off an air of mystery, which keeps the reader absorbed and on her or his toes. I love all the thought you put into this story too, it is obvious that you worked hard on this!





Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2014 11:11 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: For Compoundbreadd

This was super cute! I loved all the parallels this held with the series, they really pulled everything together nicely. So if my understanding was corrext, the Kagome that was with InuYasha didn't go through the near death experience? She never saw InuYasha in the future so slowly their memories were morphed to go along with the new memories? Maybe I read that wrong, but it would be really cool nonetheless.

This was great, very well done. My heart momentarily broke for Kagome when InuYasha said that he was married, even though I knew who he married. Very well done, thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I kind of like things vague/confusing so that the reader can come up with their own interpretation of what happened, but I'll try to explain the whole future-past I/K confusion and the way I imagined this as best as possible.rn

rnThe Kagome that was with InuYasha (future!Kagome) DID go through the near-death experience. She also experienced the misunderstanding (InuYasha telling her he was married), the scene by the well, everything leading up to the day of her high school graduation (where I tried to hint that Eri and Houjo would have gotten closer/together), the well's eventual re-opening, and her reunion with InuYasha after their three years apart (the canon story's ending). After that, in my version, they mated back in the feudal era, and thanks to the same ritual that I mentioned allowed Rin to take on Sesshomaru's lifespan, lived the next 500 years together, got married, hung around with some living members of the old crew and Sango/Miroku ancestors, etc. But at some point, living for so long, future!Kagome and InuYasha had to have been preset in Tokyo around the same time as 15-year-old Kagome falling down the well and 18-year-old Kagome at the start of this story (past!Kagome). They would have tried not running into her (and sometimes past!InuYasha) to avoid confusing or changing things in the weird parallel they've created with their time travelling and extended lifespans.

Now, Future!Kagome, by virtue of having lived through everything the past!Kagome goes through in this story, already knows that despite everything that happened, things turned out fine and she and InuYasha eventually got together, though she learns for the first time that InuYasha orchestrated what happened by the well and rekindled her hope of their reuniting when past!Kagome started doubting it. InuYasha, however, had no prior memories - except for being by the well and hearing Kagome talk to him from the other side that one time - telling him that he was meant to save past!Kagome's life and bring her to the well to talk to him/reassure her of their future together. He just ran into her without meaning to, reacted to the very real possibility of losing her, and miraculously, things worked out the way they were meant to.





Reviewer: Mamosere Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2013 12:20 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: For Compoundbreadd

Wow..., i enjoyed reading your story. This is kind of sweet and i love your ending. Thank you for such an enjoyable story

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)





Reviewer: cwillia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2013 9:38 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: For Compoundbreadd

I like it, confusingly sweet...Lol





Reviewer: InuGrrrl Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2013 6:15 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: For Compoundbreadd

Am, you know how I feel about canon, but I fucking LOVED this. Wow.

You created such a cute little maze that tied perfectly at the end with a bow. :P My effin' chest hurt when he said he was married. OMG, you don't know... >.>

I usually HATE those scenarios people put in fictions where they're in the future and InuYasha or Kagome is married to someone else. It makes me want to kick the shit out of everyone (Even though, I'm guilty of that in one of my super early stories). But this was just awesome. Huzzah!

Author's Response: LOL. It hurt my own chest to write that one scene xD But the giftee wanted such a complicated scenario and even though I could've written it a million different ways and however I wanted, I wanted to stay somewhat true to the canon and not leave people wondering why Kagome would ever want to go back the feudal era if, after bumping into InuYasha, she knows that he's around and accessible in her own era. In the end, knowing how I planned on finishing this off, it wound up being really fun to write.rnrnGlad you liked this one! :D





Reviewer: kagome313 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2013 2:27 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: For Compoundbreadd

I ADORE this piece Am Am!!! It's a treat, and it feels like I'll only be able to read ur stuff on special occasions! How is that fair?! :O

And Eri - How did that go? I'm a lil confused, but is it that the married Kags tlk to the Eri as if she was the original kags or something?

And omg how i LOVE Inuyasha!!! He just had me in fan-girl mode, swooning with everything he did. I cracked up when he sniffed her out for that kiss lmao. Typical sexy Inu! And I'm glad u put it the part w/ kags being jealous of herself, because I caught on to the direction of the plot quick so when Inu kissed kags n after he said he was married, I kept saying 'I wonder if she'll be jealous because I would!' Got me wondering if he digs the 'young' me rather than the present/old me lmao. Silly but since u put it in am not that silly right?

Also love the lines u placed, first the I was born for him n he for me part n then the love that transcends time. Really put a smile on ma lips. You know me n small details that just blossoms into something big.

This was really sweet Am Am.. and Happy New Year!!! *hugs*

Author's Response: I'm super late with this response, but THANKS NESH :D *hugs* I finally got a snow day off from work and school, so I'm just now sitting down and catching up on my reading, writing, reviewing and all that good stuff. Miss ya, Kid! Hope you're doing well.rnrnWith Eri - Future!Kagome & InuYasha exist in a weird sort of parallel. It's purposely vague and confusing, but I figured that the Kagome that exists with the InuYasha living in the Modern Era would have went through everything the "younger" her hasn't yet experienced. So, she would know everything that happened after sleeping by the well, graduating high school, going back to the feudal era, and everything since living long enough to exist in the same time period as her younger self - which means knowing how things with Eri (who I mentioned was secretly crushing on Houjo) would have turned out since she turned him down at the Christmas party. Hopefully that makes some kind of sense xDrnrnAnd I'm so happy you noticed the small details! I love tossing in things like that just for fun, especially when I write canon, so it's cool that you picked up on it <3



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