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Reviewer: night_angel147 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2012 9:59 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

hahahahahaha.... dude i love it!... you GATTA keep going on this! XD



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Chapter 3 will be out soon!





Reviewer: Inufan82 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2012 5:20 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Lol, I just love the position Inuyasha's gotten himself stuck in!  Of course the only major problem, birth certificate wise, is that the last name of the mother isn't now and never has been Hamada, sure Yash technically isn't the father either, but at least this way Koga would have very little ground to stand on if he were to ever decide that he suddenly wants custody of Kai or something.  Even if Kai is his genetically, the birth certificate now says otherwise.  Lol, still I do look forward to Kagome's reaction when she wakes up and finds out what happened...and hopefully she didn't have her heart set on a different name for the baby cause it's a little too late to change it now.  Anyway, great work so far!  I will definitely be looking forward to reading more from you soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! The second chapter(and Kagome's reaction) is up now so enjoy ^_^





Reviewer: kemari Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2012 1:31 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Great twist!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, hope you continue to enjoy it ^_^





Reviewer: WisteriaButterflies Signedstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2012 4:51 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This reads really well and it sounds interesting. :) I like it. I don't think you need to do "?!" to show shouting though. I think you can just say "shouted".

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, hope you continue to enjoy ^_^





Reviewer: DarkNeko Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2012 2:55 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I like this c: Its got a nice plot so far, and your style of writing is amazing

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy the story ^_^





Reviewer: inukagslover Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2012 6:23 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

omg this is the start of a beautiful story. I'm already smiling and it hasn't even started yet.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, hope you continue to enjoy it ^_^





Reviewer: KittyMay Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2012 2:15 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

interesting :) i like the idea very much.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing ^_^



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