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Reviewer: cesuraee Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2014 4:52 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Troubling Thoughts Have Dangerous Consequences

This was very well done! At first I was really worried about Kagome, and then InuYasha showed up and I felt relief, only for it to turn right back into sorry at him not being able to save her right away. There was great development in this story, and it had so many emotions! Thanks for sharing.





Reviewer: marishaten Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2012 7:57 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Troubling Thoughts Have Dangerous Consequences

Another gem from your...I want to write pen, but I think fingers would be more suitable here. Wonderful exploration of angst escalating into a heartbreaking climax and ending with the perfect romantic denouement.

Author's Response: And another beautiful review from you. I feel honored to be getting all of these lovely reviews. I'm really glad you enjoy my writing.



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