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Reviewer: vampire liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 6:46 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: What to do about Shippo

I didnt like this chapter all that much. it kind of felt drwan out and a bit like filler, unessecary. also, there is way too much inner dialouge. i dont need to hear their everythought like that, and you dont differentiate thought and speach enough. its confusing. also, ovefr doing the inner debate can be a bit taxing to read all the time.





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2007 8:25 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Leaving

YAY 'nother chapter!
ANd whats this Kagome/Sango got slightly tipsy? And Kagome's mind has a new home in the gutter! lol





Reviewer: vampire liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2007 11:21 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Leaving

oooo okay, this should be fun. i've been wanting him to wear some nice low-on-the-hip ripped jeans. very hot. yay! cant wait to see it.





Reviewer: Knittingknots Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 10:12 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Leaving

It's an interesting scenario. This chapter makes me want to know more!





Reviewer: vampire liaison Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 8:23 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Stupid

inuyasha changes on the night of the new moon, which is when there is no moon in the sky. full moon is actually the opposite, and he'd be his normal demon boy self at that time





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 8:00 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Stupid

I like it.
WOW!
Kagome made a bitchy move saying that. How stupid can you be..even in the heat of and arguement.. I would never.
But kagz is kinda whiney is hse always lik that and we never noticed? lol
`r4k



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