Date: January 19, 2013 12:43 pm
Chapter number: 6
Title: Us and Our Children
Very cute story. I got a lot of laughs, and your plot was fantastic. I would suggest a spell check and reread, sometimes the word didn't seem right and I think I saw lick instead of like somewhere but I don't think it was this chapter. Overall great story though, keep up the good work I would like to see more from you.